Blog Comments Week 8

I commented on Ricky Volland's blog:
https://rickyenglish1.blogspot.com/2016/10/reading-response_24.html?showComment=1477530409841#c5896424331346948416

I commented on Caroline's blog:
https://caroline-english1.blogspot.com/2016/10/the-house-of-scorpion-response.html?showComment=1477530817628

Human nature

Human nature is based on feeling. Feelings allow you to make decisions sometimes while using the train of thought. These decisions help you make choices, which leads to actions that form your life. But your feelings mainly depend on what type of person you are. If you are an anti-social nobody, you say nothing, but your feelings are calm and telling you through decisions to look at everything. This is like Piggy when he is observing the other boys on the island. A person can only think though with their logic. If a person doesn't have motives to think, then they can't use their feelings for actions.

Sister location pt. 1

Hey, you guys. It's Potato girl here with another blog for you guys. This is a new video game that just came out called Sister Location. It is a spinoff video from FNAF about experimented animatronics. I will be doing this is parts

When you first enter the factory on the first night, you are in an elevator. A voice out of nowhere calls to you, and you realize it's a recorded message. The voice is obviously a male, and he tells on how to start your other nights. I thought this was different because the other FNAf games are about you standing still. This version is about you running around to survive, which I think is a better way to play the game. Anyways, the voice tells you to move to the dance studio and shock two of the animatronics with a shocking device. Since you are in another separate room, you can barely see the other animatronics.

I think you guys need an explanation. In the past games, the animatronics are trying to kill you because of their past mistakes. The animatronics here are trying to kill you because they want your skin to hide . The animatronic's names' are Ballora the Ballerina, Circus Baby, Ennard, Biddybab, Funtime Foxy, and Funtime Freddy. Anyways, you move through the vents to the circus gallery to shock Cirus Baby. But Circus Baby isn't there. The shift then ends, leaving you in a couch in your house, watching a cheesy vampire show. I think this was a distraction so you couldn't look around the house for clues.

My thoughts on Piggy

Piggy strikes me as a small boy, but with a huge intelligence record. He is fat, though, along with asthma, which could mean he can't survive in the wild. So when he is stranded on this tropical island, he starts to panic. He's also the nobody of the group that gets ridiculed often. In the first chapter, Jack and Ralph are the first ones to call Piggy his given name in the book. But i noticed something in the details during our class disscussion. There's an island, with pink sand and ending with a tail. Thwn there's a pig in the end fo the 1st chapter that can't be caught. Last of all, there's a boy in the group trying to warn the others of something bad coming, and his name is Piggy. This is telling me that something is going tot happen, but in a bad way.

Blog Comments Week 7

I commented on Wyatt's blog:
https://wheatyl.blogspot.com/2016/10/the-hammer-of-thor.html?showComment=1476718502382#c1380303308620885600

I commented on Lane's blog:
https://lanelovestacos.blogspot.com/2016/10/response-of-louisiana-article.html?showComment=1476718663185#c1734838596508490567

I commented on Madisyn Paige's blog:
https://english1mpblog.blogspot.com/2016/10/disney-world.html?showComment=1476718932069#c3251722229501157057

Five Night's at Freddy's

This is the FNAF story, a story based off of the 4 FNAF videogames. Warning, blood, and gore included. So is you hate that, please stop reading. Anyways, enjoy my story.

The story starts with a birthday in Fredbear's Family Diner. Two animatronics sang in this establishment. Their names were Springtime Freddy and Springtime Bonnie. SF and SB entertained the kids for a long time at this birthday party. At the party, 5 kids threw a little kid into SF's mouth, killing the kid. This closed down Fredbear's Family Diner, and the original Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria was built. Springtime Freddy, now possessed with the little kid's soul, was shipped to the new location, while SB was left to rot in Fredbear's Family Diner.

Four new animatronics were made for this new establishment. Their names were Freddy Fazbear, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy. Freddy was a brown bear, Bonnie was a purple rabbit, Chica was a yellow chicken, and Foxy was a red pirate fox. They also entertained the guests. But later on, another birthday took place in the year of 1987. This time, a nightguard by the name of William Afton killed 5 kids in a parts and service room. He then stuffed kids in the Fazbear gang. Four of the kid's souls' were trapped in Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy, the fifth soul being saved for later. Because of foul odors coming from the animatronics, the restaurant was closed. This started the 2nd Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria.

 The old animatronics, the Fazbear Gang, were stripped of some of their parts for the new animatronics. They were left in the parts and service room to rot, while Springtime Freddy, now known as Golden Freddy was brought to an unknown to rot. The new animatronics was called the Toys. Their names were Toy Freddy, Toy Bonnie, Toy Chica, Toy Foxy (Mangle), Balloon Boy, and the Marionette. The fifth and final soul was put into the Marionette (Puppet). Now that the Puppet was awakened, he brought the Toys to life and put them against the nightguards. The reason because of this was because the killer of the 5 kids back in '87 was a nightguard. So when the animatronics stuffs a nightguard into a suit, they think they are killing William Afton. Unfortunately, the word got out that bloody suits were found in the parts and service room. So the 3rd Freddy Fazbear Location was born.

The original Fazbear gang was brought out of the parts and service room and refurbished to entertain again. Spring Freddy and Spring Bonnie was brought here too, but only Golden Freddy was brought to life, due to the soul inside of him. The refurbished animatronics continued to stuff nightguards into suits, with the help of Golden Freddy. Unfortunately, Afton came back and broke the animatronics to pieces. Their souls lifted from the pieces and chased the killer into the unknown room where SB laid against the wall. William jumped into the suit to protect himself, but the robot malfunctioned, killing the man in a gruesome blood shower. Some people then decided to make something out of this horror called Fazbear's Horror Attraction, held at the old Fredbear's Family Diner.

Now that the killer's spirit is inside of SF, the animatronic was re-named Springtrap. Springtrap, along with the newly made Phantoms (ghosts of the animatronics) still kept stuffing nightguards. That was until this one nightguard messed up bad and burned the place down. This set the kid's souls' free, and sent them to heaven. Thus ends the story of the FNAF games.

My trip to Hershey Factory

Going to Hershey Factory was one of the best trips in my childhood. I remember entering the building and seeing a huge, purple hall, full of chocolate aroma and child laughter. Mom and Dad led Madison and me to a ride. They said that this somewhat like a process of seeing how chocolate was made. We stopped into the moving vessel. The vessel took us through various rooms, showing us how to make chocolate. After all of us stepped off, we walked into the biggest chocolate gift shop I've shop I've ever seen. We had to move quickly out of the building after that because I didn't want to eat that much chocolate. In front of the building was an amusement park. We rode a variety of rides and had a turkey leg from one of the stalls. It soon was the end of the day and Dad carried Madison out of the area, Mom and me following behind. It was a great day.

Blog Comments Week 6

I commented on Caroline A's blog:
https://caroline-english1.blogspot.com/2016/09/13-reasons-why-reading-response-3.html?showComment=1476281869629

I commented on James C's blog:
https://jamescblogpost.blogspot.com/2016/10/response.html?showComment=1476282024479#c6935572898961100374

I commented on Hudson's blog:
https://huds0ngenglish.blogspot.com/2016/10/thanksgiving.html?showComment=1476282306590#c6450536493846524722

My Reaction to Procrastination

Hey you guys, it's Potato here. I'm going to react to the article Procrastination by writing a letter to future me. Hope you guys enjoy.


Dear Senior Me, My Future Me,

I'm writing this to you to remember the great times you've had with your sister. Don't forget that she loves you, no matter how much she irritates you. Remember to love Madison back, and to care for her. Next up, please remember your friends Laura, Bobby, Valerie, Kolin, Daniel, and SaVeon, and what they've done for you in the past. Call them and text them every day when you're in college and thank them for getting you this far. Also, promise yourself that you'll become an architect like you wanted in the past. You get to make people's lives better by making them houses. The last two are VERY important. First, you have to promise me that you will find that special one. He, or she, has to be smart, funny, pretty, and at least unique in some way. Lastly, NEVER forget your family as you grow. Remember EVERYTHING they did for you. They loved you, helped you grow, and did everything best for you. They sacrificed everything for you, which is why I want you to sacrifice and care for them in the future.

Thank you, and good luck!
Freshman Megan Nguyen

The Mortal Instruments Pt.4

HELLO, MY POTATOES! It's Potato Girl here with another blog for you. This is the 4th book of the series called the City of Fallen Angels. This is the most love related book in the series, and that's why it's my sister's favorite. She's a lovesick puppy. Anyways, I hope you guys enjoy reading this blog, along with my other blogs. And make sure to comment on what you think about the series. I'm interested in reacting to the Clockwork series. Enjoy!

The story starts with Clary and Jace practicing, or training, in the Institute. Jace is way better than Clary because he has the angel-like grace. Jace then gets jealous because Clary is texting Simon. I thought this was cute just because of this the over-protective boyfriend that wants to keep his girlfriend to himself. Meanwhile, Simon is in one of those complicated relationships, and he doesn't know how to get out of it. I can understand the situation here. Simon doesn't know that Isabelle loves him, and when he finds out, he freaks out. This is because he already has a relationship with Isabelle.

I'm just going to end this here because I can't remember the rest of the story and how I reacted to it. I will also be ending the Mortal Instrument reaction series. Reason why is because this is taking too long.

Comments Week 5

I commented on Riley Carmouche's Blog:
https://rileycarm.blogspot.com/2016/09/harrison-bergeron.html?showComment=1475698701691#c6879006471108041239
I commented on SaVeon's Blog:
http://saveons.blogspot.com/2016/09/the-city-of-bones.html

The Secrets of Mary Bowser Pt. 2

HELLO, MY POTATOES!!!! It's Potato Girl here with another blog for you. I've done at least 60 minutes this week, so this is going to be a long blog. Anyways I hope you guys enjoy this blog and make to check out the book The Secrets of Mary Bowser. It's a real page-turner!

We left at where Mary El found out about the true nature of Philadelphia. She thought the colored people there were neither nor slaves. But still, Mary El decided to leave it behind and continue with her high school. Later on, after she left high school, a man named Theodore asked for her hand in marriage. Mary El refused though because she thought of Theodore's thoughts on her parents as wrong. I thought about it too, and I agreed with Mary El at the time. I still do agree. Later on, Hattie and Mary El fought out their differences, and it concluded with Hattie telling her a secret. Her father was an undertaker, and he hid slaves in coffins to ship them up to Philadelphia. "This was part of the Underground Railroad," Hattie said. "And you have to promise not to tell a soul." Mary El promised and decided to live with Hattie and father later on. After this, the most tragic thing happened. Mary EL's mom died, leaving Mary El shattered. She stayed in a depression for a year. And that's when I stopped reading.

Sorry, you guys that I left you on a cliffhanger. But I assure I will finish this book soon.