Blog Comments Week 17

I commented on DJ's Blog:
https://djsbloge1.blogspot.com/2017/02/poem.html?showComment=1487809832674#c5516802495233469222

I commented on Jack T's Blog:
https://graysonallenftw.blogspot.com/2017/02/poem.html?showComment=1487809940988

I commented on Sophia's blog:
https://sophia-english1.blogspot.com/2017/02/animal-shelters.html?showComment=1487810023816#c366533758569345774

Poem

Euphony, slant rhyme, metaphor,

She is the beautiful moon,
while I am the sun.
She causes men to swoon,
She has all her fun.

Her hair starts black
and ends with white,
I wear slacks,
Her dress catches the light.

Her smooth skin smells of roses,
As I reek of labor and sweat.
She sits and watches,
And stares at my assets.

We are opposites,
like fire and water,
And although she loves me,
I love another.

The Muslims

The Muslims were followers of the priest Muhammed in the religion Islam. A Muslim's main priority is to contend or to defend the belief in Islam. The Muslims were at first peaceful in spreading the religion, but later became militants and spread Islam by the sword. They spread Islam over the Persian empire, Byzantine Empire, and part of Spain. The land that they conquered became known as the Muslim Empire. The Muslims engaged in many battles during their time.

In fact, they were part of the Crusades later on during the Muslim Empire. The crusades back in the day were a series of battles in which land was either taken or stolen from the Christians or Muslims. For example, the Christians took back Jerusalem during the 1st Crusade.

Blog Comments Week 16

I commented on Alex Wilson's Blog:
https://blogsgotjokes.blogspot.com/2017/02/research-project.html?showComment=1486670213334

I commented on John's Blog:
https://thegoat2323.blogspot.com/2017/02/research-skills.html?showComment=1486670462967#c4303734866335722032

Research benefits and problems

I love that my topic is science and history related. The Scientific Revolution was great for all, whether it be the high classes or the locals. It just touches me that knowledge can easily be spread and benefitted upon. For example, when Harvey Williams made his discovery on blood circulation in the 1700s, it led to the making of the world's first vaccine. This vaccine cured smallpox, and that disease become known as the first to be eradicated by mankind.

Yet with all the information, I have acquired, I have yet to fully understand the writing process. My conclusions turn out to be a summary of the intro, and I didn't pull my point out of it. I just hope I can make a better paper in the future.

ATDPTI Response 2

I think that the story took a good turn. I love how Junior finally made a friend and an intelligent friend on top of that. I also love how his name is Gordy. I used to have a friend that had that as their nickname. But I feel sad that Junior and Rowdy aren't getting along. They were friends, but the problems of race and poverty got in the way. But the big bang of this reading session was the metaphorical boner and Penelope puking the bathroom. Both of these things are very related to my life. Not that I puke in the bathroom or anything, it's just that sexual references and racist comments usually come from my closest people.

Blog Comments Week 15

I commented on Sutter's Blog:
https://sutterenglish1.blogspot.com/2017/02/absolutely-true-diary-of-part-time.html?showComment=1486068083466#c8283092369078046238

I commented on Bea' blog:
https://beassblogg.blogspot.com/2017/01/reading-response.html?showComment=1486068401161#c4563371354784374873