Saturday, February 4, 2017

Research benefits and problems

I love that my topic is science and history related. The Scientific Revolution was great for all, whether it be the high classes or the locals. It just touches me that knowledge can easily be spread and benefitted upon. For example, when Harvey Williams made his discovery on blood circulation in the 1700s, it led to the making of the world's first vaccine. This vaccine cured smallpox, and that disease become known as the first to be eradicated by mankind.

Yet with all the information, I have acquired, I have yet to fully understand the writing process. My conclusions turn out to be a summary of the intro, and I didn't pull my point out of it. I just hope I can make a better paper in the future.

1 comment:

  1. I have the same problem with my paper. Your topic seems interesting and I can't wait for your final draft.

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